You've got a nice cyberpunkish mood going on here, with some pretty good ideas. The Asian features, the eye and hair of the girl give an exotic and almost elegant aura, while the pose, the bare skin, the tattoo and the lights maintain an erotic undertone. Gloomy and mystical bass goes with the exotic mood, and playfool higher notes with the beauty of a lady.
The finishing touch is the scifi environment, with the gloves, the clothes, and the background. This is just how cyberpunk should feel like.
I am, however, not really satisfied. It must have took a while to finish this piece, but I still think this is rushed. The music is just a bit too simple, the skin plastic-like: everything is just missing those tiny, final details.
I would recommend you to be more patient, take your time if you are able, and work more on your art. This is cool, but you can do so much better than cool, you can be awesome!